Medium Close up of a student - We don't have a medium close up of a person, we only have a student and a teacher from a far off shot. It has quite a bit of their body and a lot of background in it. So next time we are going to have to take a picture of a mediumclose up. This is going to be a close up of a student from their waist up.
Text appropriotly laid out - The text needs to change, it's not very attention grabbing, like we have 'new clubs for all years' this doesn't really make people want to pick it up and read it. Also we need to change the masthead, make it bigger and change the font, because it's not standing out and not conecting with the readers. We're going to change the font to something more informal and casual so that our target audience are going to want to pick and read through it. The text also needs to be bolder and not so narrow.
We asked three different people to look at our magazine and leave a few comments under the following headings
Overall effect
1. It makes you want to read it
2. Obvious it's a school magazine
3. colourful
Images
1. good logo's, but the image is a bit blurry
2. Needs a few more pictures, only one at the moment
3. good image, but the logo's are covering the girls face
Text
1. Intriging
2. clear masthead, the bottom feature could stand out more
3. More features, the others aren't that interesting at the moment
